What you published was actually very reasonable.
But, consider this, suppose you composed a catchier post title?
I am not saying your content is not solid, however suppose you added something to maybe grab folk's
attention? I mean Detroit MI Care Alliances is kinda boring.
You might glance at Yahoo's home page and see how they create news
headlines to grab people to open the links. You might try
adding a video or a related picture or two to get readers interested about everything've got to say.
In my opinion, it would make your blog a little livelier.